It is crucial that this paper presents new findings and a clear development from the last paper. It shall hereby point out what are the contributions to the framework and how it can benefit participants of the confernce as well as readers of the paper. It shall also be focused and clear, since further details can be read in the PhD thesis.

This paper is to long and too confusing. it lists too many things and does not really bring them into a context.
It would be better to not be so details, but discuss the matter more broadly and then highlight it with some examples.
it is good to show the work in progress, but it must have a critical distance
