The notion that "space *is* a narrative device" seems overstretched to me (p2). It may be used as such a device, but why defining it essentially as narrative? You continue that "its aim is to provide ... a platform". Does space "aim" at anything? In which sense?


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The bus-stop experiment is a good testcase for some of the authors want to investigate, i.e. embodiment, spatiality,  consciousness and intentionality. As it seems that the "experiment" is just an concept at the moment, I would suggest to expand the idea to other application secenatios for the full paper (unless you have actually realized the concept until then).