•	It is recommended to plot figures 1 & 4 with the same scale, so the change between the 70s and the present is more apparent.
•	Review the numbering of the figures within the text. For example: on page 2 last paragraph, the text refers to figure 1 instead of figure 6. Again on page 9 first paragraph, the text refers to figure 20 instead of 22. And on page 10 first paragraph, the text refers to figure 24 instead of 26.
•	Double check the text styles. Some paragraphs are in size 11, while others are in size 10.
•	Referring to figures 22 and 23; if the red areas on figure 23 represent the built-up areas, the map of 2005 shows smaller built up area than that of 2010. However, the graph of figure 22 plots more area for 2005 (1050000) than for 2010 (900000). Besides, there are no units given for the area, is it in square meters, square miles, acres, or square kilometers?
•	The labels in figures 24, 25, 26 & 27 are too small to be readable. 
•	Consider black/white printing when referring to colors of objects. 