-	Using of tag to practice the microscopic description through networking might be enough as a research contribution. But, there are other parts used without any need to the extent that they weaken the research (for example, why discussing “place making in conventional perspectives” as long as the research concentrates on the virtual).
-	There are some parts (some terms illustrated) should be deleted or reduced in the theoretical background. On the other side, the implementation parts of: the introduced system, and the Chinese Garden are too small (beside only one case is demonstrated).
-	A heading must followed by some writings for illustration and introduction to the following heading (in many parts, a heading is followed by another heading).
-	Resolution of some figures is not clear enough.