I’m very intrigued by your interdisciplinary investigation and I believe you are on the right track. Well written describing clear aspects of design methodologies for human space and product design by motion capture of human activity. 
The paper is well structured – from the initial situation, the goals of research (initial situate, e.g. motion tracking, the research background and research method etc.) through to the experiment and the reflection on interdisciplinary collaboration are well described. The paper follows a golden thread and the paragraphs are balanced. The illustrations and the text are complements each other. Looking forward to an interesting debate and of course a demonstration of outstanding prototypes. 
