The paper tends to answer general questions with general answers. 
The illustrations did not reflect content.
The over structure has a basic flaw. Papers are generally expected to have basic sections like the general question, the literature review, the experimentation or critique, the discussion and finally conclusion. However, the author in this occasion missed many of these sections.

If accepted then it should be rewritten very specifically in terms of the sections mentioned above. and should concentrate on the technical aspects of the paper.

please adhere to the template of the conference, and do not change margins or font size.
