The paper talks about introducing a system, but never described it. and the reader would be disappointed not to learn about it.
While the geometric ornamentation is documented wit references, magic squares seems t have no source of documentation. Will you please reference it?

You started one of the paragraphs with "Coyne et al argue..." but you never referenced that.

The paper is missing the element of research. It is an introduction, but there is no actual research or experimentation.

There are many typos all over the paper.
There is no consistency in using British and American English, e.g. color/colour. Please use only one.

