As written, your research is in a very early stage of development. It needs to be more strongly relate to a clear problematic statement of the "areas of online communities and forums" in order to justify the use of your propose piece of software, DesignMap, and the methodology should explain how it will demonstrate that. Also, practical examples should be part of this demonstration. And finally, editing, editing, editing your writing.
Previous comments about your initial abstract are still in order:
Restate the paper objectives in order to show the specific and benefit of using your system as a design aided. Also, develop the semantic meaning of your graph design process representation.
